Clockwork's Poëtry

[Clockworkchicken]

poëtry? ok, let's make an attempt, shall we?

Run, little fiend, little prey,
for you know you can't hide,
from me, my kin and our might.
flee as you may.

You know I will catch up.

ha, cold is it, not?
you finaly feel the fear,
you finaly feel the tears,
even I've got.

on my first time

no need to hurry, my child,
let us feast on your body now,
close your eyes to rest now,
there is no need to worry.

You will wake up again.

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ok, say it: that sucked

[Eblise]

That sucked? Noo, I think your writings are very nice. It keeps the reader interested. If you would like to make your works better, you should try put some more words in that can stimulate your senses--and not just go off of feeling ^-^

[Calli]

[glow=black,2,300]-nudges teh Larry- It is interasteing and doesn't suck! 'Specially for someone who doesn't have english as their first langage Keep it up you chicken you! [/glow]